Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Tales from the Pacific Part I

The boat was sleek and still very shiny, straight out of the boatmakers, she was on her delivery voyage – her maiden voyage. The crew was scarce – just enough to navigate the majesty that was the South Pacific.

Yet like all medieval monarchs, the ocean is fickle in her gifts. What had seemed a good outlay for the voyage soon changed to the rumblings of a jealous woman. Not just any woman, but an empress who was used to having her desires fulfilled. This empress desired the smooth white craft slipping playfully through her waters as though it were a dolphin. The empress crouched and gathered her energies ready to pounce.



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Monsreal watched the distant storm with a weather-worn squint. He'd heard there was a brand new little schooner out there, ripe for the taking. He lowered his left hand from his scarred brow and gripped the rail in anticipation, the boat wasn't all he'd be having by the time this storm was over.
Captain Rudolph Marcus Monsreal was not a man who raised his voice unless absolutely necessary. He didn't bother turning to face the bosun standing next to him. Brugs was watching the same storm through his spyglass.
"Have the men prepare. We're courting Lady Storm this day." He instructed in a gruff but quiet voice - let his right-hand man do all the shouting. Brugs continued his inspection for a moment then lowered the glass and contracted it with a dramatic snap. He turned to his captain.
"Arr! Do yar really think we gonnarr find the wee craft an the salty sea dogs who sail her, Cap'n?" He asked doubtfully. Monsreal remained staring out at the wall of dark cloud in front of them and curled his upper lip as he sucked a piece of meat from between his teeth. Then he did turn to his bosun and Brugs tried not to meet the impenitratable gaze of his captain.
"We'll find her Brugs, and we'll take her."



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The graceful schooner continued to glide through the waves which were beginning to build. The storm had grown up all around them. The wind picked up and whipped the crew with its cruel blows, using water to scratch at their eyes, cheeks and fingers. The crew were no amateurs however, and though they were wary of the weather, they had no need yet to be afraid. They drove the vessel hard, using the storm to her best advantage, letting the craft show them what she was made of.
Greta loved taking the tiller, it was by far the most delightful job to have on the craft. She watched the gauge to measure her angle in the water and loved to feel the pull of the craft as she strained under her. She delighted in riding the vessel to its limits.
"You'll take her too far off course, listing like that." Dan complained. Greta rolled her eyes at him. It was HER turn at the tiller, she could sail how she liked. And she liked to see the speed indicator running higher than the other crew members would sail her. More than the chronic joy of controlling the craft, Greta loved the extreme (though brief) control of the crew themselves when she chose to tack. One day Greta was going to leave this crew and apply for a new job. A job as a skipper, and then she wouldn't have to share the tiller with anyone.
Unfortunately her two hours in control were over soon, and Roger took over. Roger wasn't as bad as Dan for being lame, she thought, but he still could do a lot more with the craft than he bothered to. She sat near him and they chatted for a while, Greta giving steering suggestions every now and then. Roger took them in good humour but didn't change his style.
"The storm's only getting worse, Greta, it's best to err on the side of caution."
This time Greta didn't actually roll her eyes - though she did mentally. She and Dan had been married three years now, and she could treat him with loving contempt without causing too much friction or unease. Good natured as Roger was, he would probably be insulted if a woman who'd only been sailing six years to his thirty did the same at him. She rubbed rain and saltwater off her face and swept back her saturated hair, trying to plaster it back on her scalp.

A few hours later and even Greta wasn't trying for speed. It was all she could do to hold the vessel onto ANY course as the waves rolled under and over the craft. Twice in the rain she lost grip of the wheel and when Dan staggered over to her and asked if she wanted him to take over, she gladly stepped down. She would have stayed out here with him, but the weather was getting far too wild. She would be better below, where she could look up the weather report, and observe how Roger dealt with the situation.
Sandra, Cooper, and Fred were sitting on the portside beds, quiet and drawn. Both Bill and Marie looked as though they were about to be sick. Everyone had put their life jackets on long ago. Greta was about to ask Roger if she could do anything to help him when there was an almighty crack and the vessel begin to right herself.
What the...? Roger and Greta both ran for the stairs, Dan would neither tack nor gybe on his own - he couldn't - so what was going on? When she came up top it looked to Greta as though Dan had just stood back up from a fall. Roger had already asked what was going on. Greta noticed Dan was only holding the wheel with one loose hand. Why?
Dan looked disturbed.
"Something snapped, and the tiller went slack. The boat came up on her own."
He looked briefly at Greta, then back at Roger.
"We've lost steering."










15 comments:

Ju's little sister said...

Please, please accept my humble apologies for any bastardisation of or failure to correctly use/spell nautical terms. I have very limited experience, I hope I don't make anyone wince.

Hugs, JLS.

lorenzothellama said...

"Ye really think we gonna find the wee craft, Cap'n?" This sounds like Viking Warrior language!

Brilliant JLS. Keep it going. You will outdo Simon's Ordinary Life!

Martin Stickland said...

Hey is this your little yarn? Very good if it is.

Keep up the writing Sarah, you will get published one day and remember I am on 10% of all royalty's!

Ju's little sister said...

Lorenzo Llamy, Quoted speech has been duly piratised. Please read again!

xx

Raelha said...

I love the third picture. Back again when I've read the text.

simon said...

well, it certainly sounds like what is about to happen to australia under Rudd! :o)

(Rudd is rudderless)

great story!

lorenzothellama said...

I like Rudd! He apologised to the Aborigines!

Thanks for the offer of help in sorting out the Stationery Office. I think Mr Maalie may know more than he is letting on! I'll swallow those words when Mr Young gets the bill!

simon said...

Lorenzo- when is the british government going to say sorry to my family for breaking them up and sending them here on the first fleet? I want an apology and compensation and my rightful British passport restored...

"Sorry" has opened up the floodgates for us being sued.

frankly I have nothing to be sorry for..... I feel nothing for them at all.

Watch this space- it will make NO difference to the plight of the aboriginals at all. it is their choice to live as they do

Now before you get upset- I have an aboriginal uncle ( true!).. highly successful man...

funny - I said before the election if Rudd gets in interest rates will go from 7% to 10% in the first 12 months, there will be a wages blow out, and interest rates will be 13% by the end of his term...

Interest rate is now in the 9's .. more to come in a few weeks....

Apology to the aboriginals? means nothing..

If we gave this country back to them ( in theory).. it would return to dust ( take Zimbabwe as an example)

They do not need an apology- they need schooling, medicine, housing, policing and the grog removed.

:o)

DID he say sorry to all those first home buyers about to lose tie homes??

Viking Warrior said...

Marry thouest me?

Maalie said...

Oooh! I love tales of the sea! And I didn't spot any bastardisation ;-)

Simon: frankly I have nothing to be sorry for..

Except for that dreadful sin that was bestowed upon you when Adam (or was it Eve? Or the snake?) ate that apple...

We are currently demanding an apology from the Norwegians for the pillaging of our women that went on by their Viking ancestors, and also the Romans and Normans, the Picts and the Scots, the Hugenots and the Saxons and Jutes and Angles for the damage they did to my country on their successive invasions.

lorenzothellama said...

Ooops. Grovel Simon.

Who are you asking to marry you VW? Is it Simon or JLS?

today's word: grarsyarsy

lorenzothellama said...

Maalie, you were on at the same time as me!
I suggest you go to Viking's blog and request an apology for all the pillaging he and his ancestors have done. You'll probably get a knife between your ribs.

Martin Stickland said...

Put the kettle on spanner girl, I will be round for a cup of Rosie Lee (tea.

How is Ye do'in likkle Sis?

M

Shrinky said...

Hey you, you really ARE a writer (grin)! That's a wonderful little tale, I look forward to reading a lot more (beautiful illustrations too).

Martin Stickland said...

Shiver ma timbers me old sea scurvy dog friend!

How is you? Me is fine?